Critiques Begun on My Novella

Prologue from Love in Smallfoot Alley has been critiqued, and that means rewrites are next. The way the crit group works, it takes forever to get a chapter critted, so I'm shopping around for another group.

Meanwhile, here's a picture of the protags. I can't figure out whether they be white or off-white....

Chris "Kit" Dupree
Misogynistic, semi-reclusive, blind to his own loneliness.

Leslie Hoffman
Optimistic, genial, solitary but not by choice

Circumstance brings them together -- and puts them in danger

Kit's Theme -- Fingerprints  -- by Larry Carlton
 

Leslie's Theme -- Love and Paragraphs -- by Chris Standring